My dear classmates,
Our monitor suggests that we have "Friday News Hour". As to this activity, I really suppose it is beneficial to us students. The reasons are as follows. ( There are a couple of reasons as follows.)
To begin with, we can open our horizon and enlarge our knowledge by reading newspaper
because it contains a lot of information. In addition, reading newspaper enables us to get closer to the world and know what happened at present at home and abroad. For example, we may know more information about the massive earthquake in Sichuan\ the torch relay of the Olympic Games in different places. Last but not least, students may stay away from net bar due to the attraction of reading newspaper.
From my perspective\ As far as I'm concerned, the activity should be held regularly on
Friday. Apart from this, we can have some heated discussion based on what we have read in newspaper.
I do believe this activity will be of great benefit to us and attract every single student.
内容要点:
1 你对“周五读报活动”的看法。
2 陈述你的理由(可举例说明)。
3 你的具体建议。
范文解析:
1. as to “就什么来说”, as to the climate ( 讲西安我的家乡时讲过)
2. suppose “我认为”,有很多词来替换think包括 hold the viwe that, consider
3. be beneficial to\be of great benefit to “对什么有好处”,我的嘴都说出泡的表达。
4. The reasons are as follows. “原因如下”,强调过N次的模版句。
5. to begin with\ in addition\ apart from\last but not least 也是说破嘴的逻辑词
6.open one's horizen 开阔视野 \ enlarge one's knowledge 增长知识
7.at home and abroad “国内外”
8. enable sb to so sth “使某人做某事”,我们讲义上还有
9. torch relay 这是我在各个班最后都提到的“火炬传递”,高考阅卷下周二在外院开始,老师们看到这个很新颖的举例,你的分数自然不会低
10. due to “由于”,to是介词,当时还讲了owning to, thanks to ,进行了区别
11. from my perspective\ as far as i'm concerned “就我来看”,我讲过N+1次的
12. heated discussion “激烈讨论”,正反观点类模版第一句中讲过
13.do believe 主动启用强调句(句子多样性原则)
很多同学在考前头一天给我电话说是不是语文考了地震,英语会不会也出现,大家是多虑了,陕西考区全国三卷的水平,话题绝对都是最简单,最基本的和学生生活相关话题,不管怎么样,考试结束了,努力总有回报,是收获的季节了。大家可以留言交流一下你的作文和想法。我想,对于所有上过我作文的同学可以做到问心无愧了,享受假期,但是也为未来尽早做准备吧!
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