议论型作文之11分作文 

一、篇章连贯：可以通过文章内容的内在联系来表现篇章的连贯性。
1、具体到一般： 表现形式为先举例具体的事例进行分析、说明，进而得出论证或结论，在段末往往以主题句的形式表现出来。
2、一般到具体：表现为在文章段首以主题句的形式出现，然后通过具体的叙述、说明、举例使主题句变得具体、明白、易懂。   

二、 常用句型
１、 开头
         It's well known to us that...
         Recently,... has been brought to popular attention/has become the focus of public concern.
         One of the universal issues we are faced with / that cause increasing concern is that...
         People's view/opinions /ideas on ... vary from person to person.Some people think that ... they hold this opinion because...  However,others hold that...
2、主要论述方法
         A is to B what C is to D
         According to ..., but there is no evidence whatsoever to show...
         The example cited,while suggestive of these trends,is insufficient to warrant their truth because there is no reason to belivev that the data drawn form... is representative of...
         As it stands, this argument suffers from three critical flaws.

3、结尾
         In my opinion,it is more advisable to do ... than to do
         Taking into account all these factors,we may reasonably come to the conclusion that...
         It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of...
         We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced with
         It is high time that we put an end to... Otherwise,...

作业：（以下为一篇11分范文，请练习按要求改写成漂亮的14分作文）

With the deepening of reform and openingup of our country,studying overseas is becoming an increasingly popular option.(2) Some choose to further their studies abroad.(3) they insist that overseas study can benefit them in different ways . (4) First,when they live in a foreign country,they can improve their foreign language skills.(5) Second,if they complete part or all of their education overseas,they can gain a broader or different perspective on their field of study.(6) Third , they can experience a different culture first-hand
要求：
1、句（2）（3）合成一句，句（2）改成带定语从句的主语
2、句（4）中的状语从句改称独立主谓语结构
3、句（5）中条件状语从句改称主语，句（5）变成简单句          

     (1)However,many people favor studying at home.(2) They argue that ,studying abroad is too expensive and therefore does not pay off and have no language and cultural barriers.
要求：
1、句（1）改成" there be"句型；
2、句（2）改成两句，分别陈述两个正反论证的两个理由；
          
     (1) I,myself,believe both opinions are acceptable in some sense.(20 some students wish to have overseas academic experience.(3) If they have got the chances and financial resources,they should seize the opportunity to go abroad and broaden their vision.(4) On the other hand , if conditions don't permit,they can pusue their studies at top universities in our conutry.(5) What counts is not the place where they study,but what they can learn.
要求：1、句（2）、（3）合成一句，句（2）改成句（3）中条件状语从句中主语的定语从句；

参考答案：
   With the deepening of reform and openingup of our country,studying overseas is becoming an increasingly popular option. People who choose to further their studies abroad insist that overseas study can benefit them in different ways . First, living in a foreign country,they can improve their foreign language skills. Second, completing part or all of their education overseas,help them gain a broader or different perspective on their field of study. Third , they can experience a different culture first-hand
   However,there are still many people who favor studying at home.(2) They argue that , for one thing, studying abroad is too expensive and therefore does not pay off . For another, there are no language and cultural barriers if they study in our country.
   I,myself,believe both opinions are acceptable in some sense. If students who wish to have overseas academic experience. have got the chances and financial resources,they should seize the opportunity to go abroad and broaden their vision. On the other hand , if conditions don't permit,they can pusue their studies at top universities in our conutry. What counts is not the place where they study,but what they can learn.

议论型作文之14分作文

作业：（以下为一篇11分范文，请练习按要求改写成漂亮的14分作文）
     (1)"Failure is the mother of success" is a well-known proverb.(2) It teaches us that failure is not a bad thing,and as long as we can learn from the failing experience and cheer up,failure will turn into a stepping-stone to sucess.
要求：句(2)得粗体部分后加入调节观点的词,变成部分否定
         
     (1)My personal experience is a case in point.(2) I entered for the english speech contest last year and was knocked out in the preliminary contest.(3) Not well prepared either mentally or academically then, my failure was inevitable.(4) However,from my failing experience I knew I had some problems with my pronunciation and I should learn some strategies of making public speech.(5)So in the following year,following the tapes and to imitate the speeches of native speakers I made great effort to improve my pronunciation.(6)I also read some books on public speech and practiced the theories in the discussion of English classes.(7) This year,I entered for the speech contest again.(8)I won the second prize.(9) Without the lesson I learned from last year's failure,I can never succeed this year .My failure last year is the mother of my success this year.
要求：
1、纠正句（3）粗体部分垂悬错文
2、纠正句（5）粗体部分的平行结构错误；
3、在粗体的句（8）前加入一个设问句，承上启下，并吸引读者注意。           

      The truth of the proverb has been proved by countless other facts.(2) so many new things have been invented after the inventor's countless experiments (3) So many masterpieces have been written by writers whose early works were rejected by publishing houses again and again.(4) there fore ,we can safely draw the conclusion that failure is the mother of success .(5) since nobody can avoid failure,we should make failure a stepping-stion to success.
要求：
1、将句(4)中的粗体部分用调节观点的词代替,使语气更缓和
2、将句（5）中的粗体部分改成设问句，强调观点，引起思考
 
参考答案:
     "Failure is the mother of success" is a well-known proverb. It teaches us that failure is not necessarily a bad thing,and as long as we can learn from the failing experience and cheer up,failure will turn into a stepping-stone to sucess.
My personal experience is a case in point. I entered for the english speech contest last year and was knocked out in the preliminary contest.Since I was not well prepared either mentally or academically then, my failure was inevitable.                 
     However,from my failing experience I knew I had some problems with my pronunciation and I should learn some strategies of making public speech.So in the following year,following the tapes and imitating the speeches of native speakers I made great effort to improve my pronunciation.I also read some books on public speech and practiced the theories in the discussion of English classes. This year,I entered for the speech contest again.What happened? I won the second prize. Without the lesson I learned from last year's failure,I can never succeed this year .My failure last year is the mother of my success this year.
     The truth of the proverb has been proved by countless other facts. so many new things have been invented after the inventor's countless experiments So many masterpieces have been written by writers whose early works were rejected by publishing houses again and again. there fore ,we may safely draw the conclusion that failure is the mother of success . since nobody can avoid failure,why not make failure a stepping-stion to success.

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